by Robert Frost
Some say the world will end in fire.
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
but if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
The which character looked and sounded like it should. Read with feeling.
ReplyDeleteBoth did a great job! KS, ML
ReplyDeleteGreat inflection in your voice MH
ReplyDeleteI liked the choice of characters for the theme. Pausing and emphasis on the main ideas are well used. PJ
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Good use of emphasis. A&J
ReplyDeleteGood tone and rhythm throughout both readings. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful voice! H&A&N
ReplyDeleteGood phrasing.
ReplyDeleteGreat voice in each character! -EW
ReplyDeleteThe snowman has a more upbeat cadence and seems funnier...more appealing to younger students. - LB
ReplyDeleteNice job- good rhythm in reading.
ReplyDeleteIt almost sounds like the snowman's voice should be on our witch. In retrospect, we thought our witch should sound more "witchy"! ;)
ReplyDeleteYou picked the best avatar. The background choice nicely added to the feeling of the poem. Your sentence fluency made the poem really come alive!
ReplyDeleteGreat avatar and background. Your reading expressed the poem well.
ReplyDeleteLike the use of fire for the back ground, while being funny with the moose.
ReplyDeleteI think you had a pretty good flow.
ReplyDeleteInstead of talking so plainly, maybe you change your voice a little? Talking about the end of the world you shouldn't be so relaxed about it.
I would suggest that your pauses are slightly longer for dramatic effect.
I liked the fire in the background. The sentence fluency was ver good with this reading.
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